We were once so innocent
But our fall was imminent
From grace we have descended
Into lives unintended
Here we’ll find so much more
As we seek to explore
All the things once forbidden
We are free to envision
So take my hand, do not fear
Let me wipe away that tear
Lie with me beneath the stars
And see the world is now ours
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jadedheart
December 23rd, 2011 at 10:39 AM
This was just beautiful and I love it! 🙂
December 23rd, 2011 at 3:42 PM
Thank you!
December 23rd, 2011 at 12:02 PM
A cosmic kaleidoscope of a poem, jadedheart – wonderful
December 23rd, 2011 at 3:42 PM
Thank you so much Martin!
December 23rd, 2011 at 11:00 PM
Gabby and I nominated you for the Candle LIghter award, because who deserve it you don’t have to do anything, but say “Thank you” have a great holiday. hugs, Autumn
December 24th, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Thank you so much!
December 24th, 2011 at 2:51 AM
“We are free to envision”–YES WE ARE!!!!!!! Thank you for this bolstering, encouraging poem today.
December 24th, 2011 at 11:08 AM
You are so welcome! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
December 24th, 2011 at 1:52 PM
So romantic. And this is what true love is, i guess 🙂
Beautiful
December 24th, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Thank you so much 🙂
December 25th, 2011 at 4:06 PM
Beautiful lines: “Lie with me beneath the stars
And see the world is now ours”
Indeed, we ‘are’ the world. 🙂 Great poem!
December 25th, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Thank you so much, glad you liked it!
December 25th, 2011 at 9:37 PM
“We were once so innocent
But our fall was imminent
From grace we have descended
Into lives unintended”
Wow. You must have torn these words from the annals of my soul…magnificent!
December 25th, 2011 at 9:55 PM
I’m so glad you liked it, it was actually quite interesting to write as each line ended up in a different direction that I initially intended or thought it would go.