It never changes, everyone lies
The world will spin and everyone dies
But when we’re gone will we leave a mark
Or will our lives fade into the dark
Would anyone notice when I’m gone
Or would they forget me with the dawn
If I stepped back from all I know
Would they notice I didn’t show
Just a shadow upon this life
Finally bowing to all the strife
jadedheart
August 19th, 2012 at 8:36 PM
Wow…so I do believe there is always a mark left behind, every life touches others , in some ways bad , in most good.We are creatures of energy, positive and negative , we are planets that draw our own moons to us…we have the power to choose…Darkest poem I have read in awhile and shook me to my core
August 19th, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Everything I write I try to evoke thought, sounds like I did so with you so my goal accomplished
August 19th, 2012 at 9:14 PM
Very much so Dark Lady!
August 19th, 2012 at 9:17 PM
🙂
August 19th, 2012 at 10:05 PM
love life..hate life…but nothing else matters, but life !
August 19th, 2012 at 10:07 PM
Very true, life is so valuable
August 20th, 2012 at 9:47 AM
Loved it !
August 20th, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Thanks! 🙂
August 20th, 2012 at 1:33 PM
If you have touched even one life with compassion, you will never be forgotten!
August 20th, 2012 at 2:48 PM
That’s what we all hope for, thanks granbee 🙂